Thursday, July 8, 2021

Jinnie speech


I chose to do my speech on camping at Golden Bay holiday park because it was fun camping and I love the beach.

I could improve my speech by not be so nervous.

I enjoyed doing my speech  because it is my favourite  topic

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jinnie,

    How are you? I hope you are all good in your bubble at home!

    I enjoyed looking at your blog and seeing your slide show you used for your speech about camping at Golden Bay.

    I think you did a really cool job of adding the extra bits of information for your reader, like about the Hectors dolphin and the Waikoropupu Springs.

    Your holiday looks like it was so much fun and you did so much. What was your favourite part and why?

    I look forward to reading some of your more recent work that you create while you are learning from home and school during lockdown. And a wee hint, if you are like me and need help remembering how to post yo your blog, ask those older siblings of yours to help you out 😃

    Keep up the awesome work Jinnie, I love seeing your work 🤗🌟🏆!

    Tracey - TA

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.